A new poem! It's based on something i read in a book but i kinda made it up!

Aragorn · Last edited by Aragorn on Sat Mar 28, 2009 7:11 pm; edited 1 time in total

(ahem) This is kinda long, but it's kinda kewl too.

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In the deep green forests,
in the time of snow,
in a ramshackle hovel,
there was born a warrior,
with one destiny known of then,
to kill the foe in Durza, in the land of shadows.
Taught by the old and wise,
united with a ancient dragon,
to kill the foe in Durza, in the land of shadows.
Given a education of the ways of tthe ancient Dragon Riders and of how to kill the foe in Durza,
the young warrior now came of age was able to fulfill her current destiny,
To kill the foe in Durza, in the land of shadows.
The young warrior traveled away from her homeland,
and fought the foe in Durza, in the land of shadows.
There she defeated the foe, with help from Fang, her dragon, despite the fear in her heart.
And the young warrior flew back to the forest of the elves to learn the secret the elder Rider and Dragon would share once she had killed the foe in Durza, in the land of shadows.

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I'm thinking about writing a second chapter, but i'll need feedback. Post what you think, and if you think there should be a chapter #2.

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